thats sweet that you had it published. the design looks good, the only thing that bothers me is the grey arm, feels a bit out of place, and theres a bit of a tangent where it connects at the corner of the breast and the nonbreast ribcagey stomach area.
Yeah, I see what you mean with the tangent. I was trying to be careful too >_<
I agree that the grey was a little strange, but without it the arms looked strange, because it read as the foreground arm without attaching to the foreground shoulder. You win some you lose some though. :) Thanks for the crit.
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thats sweet that you had it published. the design looks good, the only thing that bothers me is the grey arm, feels a bit out of place, and theres a bit of a tangent where it connects at the corner of the breast and the nonbreast ribcagey stomach area.
Yeah, I see what you mean with the tangent. I was trying to be careful too >_<
I agree that the grey was a little strange, but without it the arms looked strange, because it read as the foreground arm without attaching to the foreground shoulder. You win some you lose some though. :) Thanks for the crit.
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